1. that branch on the left on the ground catches my eye
2. His expression very weird and he is not holding her like he wants her
3. Don't like this one , the blanket over them.. just a no from me
4. Love it but can't see him
5. Awkward crop at knees
7. Weird tone
8. Can't see him
9. Nice BNW but can't see him
11. Very good !!.. leaves over her dress leg?
13. VERY VERY good !!