Eve (not work safe)

[DramaDork626]

Olympus Digital, indoor, no flash, medium lighting

Here I was going for a peaceful effect kind of giving it and Adam and Eve-like theme.
Does it come across?

 

[Jeff Canes]

-Here I was going for a peaceful effect kind of giving it and Adam and Eve-like theme. Does it come across?

No IMO, her eye makeup is to dark and the bricks column seem like the wrong setting for Adam and Eve, and it’s a bit erotic, more of a 60’s free love felling IMO,

But do I like the shoot other that the dark make up around the eyes

 

[niccig]

I have to say I'm with jeff. I like the picture, but I don't get the whole adam and eve thing. I think the dark makeup ruins the effect.

 

[bethany138]

Umm... I think its a good idea and a good start...
A tree instead of a brick wall would have been cooler - and I think you need a model with DARK long hair and the makeup should either be lighter or much darker.

I see lonnggg black hair with dark sharp eye makeup... and something different with the leaves...against a tree with really cool bark.

Just my thoughts - cool idea tho..
b

Edit - and no necklace - and the inclusion of an apple or something would be kinda neat... maybe an apple orchard with the other trees in the background - kinda blurred..

lol - sorry... i get into the dark stuff...hehe