Nice exposure and depiction of character. A main subject is clearly depicted, but perhaps it is too centered in the frame. I think more picture added to the right border would have improved the composition.
Although normally I would agree with the centering of the image, in this case, the use of the foreground to frame the subject makes the centering work for me.
I agree with Chase on this one. The second crop give the image more power and the line of people on the right lead your eye right to the subject. I think the framing here is top notch!