First Shoot with MM model. C&C pwease

[Bram]

Thanks Pete I really hope my next shoot goes alot better then this one. This model wants to work with me again but I think i'm going to respectfully decline.
Yeah nubbs thanks for the feedback. I do believe that I now know what to and not to do.

Moving on to better things hopefully. Can anybody recommend a decently priced. Considering i'm going to school full time and working part time. Can somebody recommend a decently priced portrait lens.

 

[...take the shot!]

Awesome bike shot.
Don't know if the flash was needed though.