First time photo-shoot

[jinn83]

Hey! im new here to the forum but i wanted to share a couple photos from a recent photoshoot i did.. looking for any kind of criticism

http:// 752 by jinnSPI, on Flickr

http:// 549 by jinnSPI, on Flickr

 

[cgipson1]

My 2 cents:

#1.. nice shot.. good pose...highlights on her are a little strong.. but not bad for ambient light. Face needs more fill! You cut her feet off.. bad! That sort of kills the photo....

#2... white balance looks like it is off. Crop is way too tight. Pose is terrible.. she looks very awkward in that position. A lot of dead space.. do a vertical crop....with her to one side, not centered..

oh.. and welcome to the forum!

 

[WesternGuy]

Welcome to the forum. I really don't have too much to add to what cgipson1 has said - #1. legs cropped, etc., and #2 colour is off - skintone, WB, not sure and pose is very awkward. I would have tried #2 using portrait mode instead of landscape mode, not that there is anything wrong with landscape mode for portrait photography, a lot depends on the components in the picture besides the model. My 0.02¢ worth.

Cheers,

WesternGuy

 

[jinn83]

Thanks for the comments guys! very appreciated