Fisherman

[montecarlo]

Hello to all of you.

This is my first post.

© Cosmin Munteanu (resize and greyscale)

Pentax K100D , Jupiter-9 2/85

 

[a5i736]

wow i like this, its beautiful! but what do u need critiqued?

 

[montecarlo]

Hello,

Thank you. I would like an oppinion about it, and of course, whats more important, to improve and learn, because one always have to learn something new.
Thank you again.

Cosmin.

 

[391615]

I almost didn't notice the fisherman, he wasn't in great detail and I found myself looking at the tree more than anything else. I don't think the shot is in good focus either.

 

[just x joey]

looks good, i think more contrast so the everything is in silhouette might look nice. for some reason the tree and the grass just make this photo look busy. can u post the color version? and maybe you can do some post processing in the color version, like make the fisherman's shirt bright red so it draws your eye to him, and make the surrounding foliage dark green?