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captblue1

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this is my first submission so be gentle. i do want some tips and criticism though. thanks
 
NIce shot. Welcome to the forum BTW.
Might just be my monitor, but the flower just seems a little soft. Great DOF and the comp is cool. Maybe boost the contrast a tad?
But it might still be this cheapy monitor I got.
 
Hey CaptBlue! Its a nice pic of a hibiscus flower, I hope you don't mind but I felt it needed a little bit more 'punch' - so I had a quick play to adjust the colours. All I did was crop in slightly to fill more of the frame with your subject, and did an 'auto levels' and 'auto colours' in photoshop. Oh yeah, the frame too...:)
Next time, try to get in a little closer so that there isnt so much of that blank background on the right hand side - but overall well done!

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