icepuppet
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Hey, I'm new here.
Okay, so I love this photo but I KNOW there is room for improvement.
Okay, so I love this photo but I KNOW there is room for improvement.

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Thank you! I did remove some of the red and I like it a lot more now!mysteryscribe said:It has a lot of emotion and thats a good thing.... It had a fundamentally nice compositon and that is nice... I am sure it means a lot to you because of who the people are and it has a universal appeal.
Im not much on this kind of thing but I think the color is off. You might want to take out some of the red. The very bright (they say blownout around here) area on the little girls face is distracting but you cant do anything about it now. I would say mostly to improve it change the color balance.
Please dont rush off to do anything until you hear from the real experts on this stuff...
LaFoto said:Hallo icepuppet and welcome to ThePhotoForum.
Your very nice photo of grandfather and granddaughter should best go into our General Gallery here since you are asking for some general critique and just pointers to what you can do - our guidelines for Critique are a little stricter.
I'll move it for you.