Fun w/ Polariods

[Efergoh]

Shot with a Mamiya Universal camera with Polaroid 669 pack film.
I was going for a retro pin up/WWII Recruiting thing with the muddy colors, contrast, and soft focus. The film is balanced for daylight, and the lighting for the shot was tungsten.

 

[abraxas]

For the sake of commenting on a hot chick, maybe too much at the top of the photo, too square a pose (maybe just repositioning the sword in front of or behind her leg) and the coat makes her legs look stubby.

 

[jaa1180]

The pose is very square.. I think the sword is making a line that does not need to be there. I would move the sword also. Perhaps move her around in different poses. Depending on what you are wanting to say in the shot.

 

[blackdoglab]

study some pinups of Betty Grable or even Bettie Page. Have her stand up and play a bit more.