Geometry and Art

[irfan.in.tx]

Denver Art Museum.

Canon 5d mark ii, Zeiss/Contax 50 mm f 1.4 at f/11, 1/160", ISO 250.



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C&C welcome.

 

[KenC]

Not bad. Consider cropping the top to eliminate that little sliver of sky. There's also a little lens distortion that's making the edge curved. A tiny quibble is that there are a couple of spots and streaks in the sky that need to be removed - was this taken through a window?

 

[irfan.in.tx]

Thanks for the comments. I think the spots are dust on the sensor

 

[snowbear]

Nice.
I might try to clone out the white triangle in lower right.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

For me, it's a little jarring and unpleasant.
I find dividing the frame diagonally feels aggressive and harsh. Add the busyness and angles of the lines in the "roof?"...
The overhang of the pointy dark form...pointy, sharp, dangerous.

Rotate it 180° and it feels very different!

 

[sleist]

For me, it's a little jarring and unpleasant.
I find dividing the frame diagonally feels aggressive and harsh. Add the busyness and angles of the lines in the "roof?"...
The overhang of the pointy dark form...pointy, sharp, dangerous.

Rotate it 180° and it feels very different!

Great observation and explanation. Additionally, the colors are not very complimentary. Perhaps monochrome?

 

[irfan.in.tx]

Thanks for the views, again. Its good to see things from other perspectives and learn a thing or two.