Grain & Leaves

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Here are two photographs of plants I made last weekend.

The first one is titled "Grain":

Grain_by_MrRichards.jpg


The second one is titled "Leaves I":

Leaves_I_by_MrRichards.jpg


Helpful comments and suggestions are always highly appreciated.

Regards,
Sebastian

Edit: as many people prefer concrete questions: How about the sharpness of the photographs, are they sharp enough, could the sharpness be improved? Any suggestions concerning the composition? How about the black & white conversion, contrast, amount of details?
Feel free to add other points.

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Very nice shots- other than that, I got nothing for you.
 
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Well, then I guess, I gotta say thank you!
 

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Those are both great shots. Love the contrast in the first one.
 

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My only gripe w/ the first shot is that the shadows are all about the same shade. I'd like to see more variation.

Other than that, great work.
 
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Thanks a lot jlbrew and Alpha.

@Alpha: I see your point about the shadows, would you be able to work up a quick example of how you would vary the shadows, if I sent you the DNG?
 

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Thanks a lot jlbrew and Alpha.

@Alpha: I see your point about the shadows, would you be able to work up a quick example of how you would vary the shadows, if I sent you the DNG?

Sure. You can either PM it to me or PM me and I'll give you my email address.
 

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