Hackettstown Street Fair, NJ! 9/14/08

PhilGarber

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Hey all,

This was my first shot at photojournalism.how did I do? C&C (though not crushingly frank criticism please:blushing:).
 

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Sorry Phil.....just not a lot to comment on here. The juggler is kinda cool and you have good exposure and fill light on the boys but other than that these are just snapshots that probably have some value to you but not much to anyone else.
 
I think #1 is the only one here that could pass for true photojournalism. On my screen it looks a little dark and blurry. The second one also looks blurry and it doesn't really show much at all. While the exposure looks good on #3, kids posing for a camera is not photojournalism.

I hope that helps ya. Keep trying.
 

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