i dont see blown out areas on my monitor...
they looks awesome.
the swishy-shishy jacket was a good choice for the first one, it's kind of haptic and you can easily imagine what it sounds like sliding over bare skin. sexy!
There are no blown out areas on my monitor either. I like the triangular highlight on the near cheek in #1 and I like the light ratio.
I wonder if #2 could have been improved had the light ratio been larger so that the wrinkles on the neck would have been more obscured in shadow.
Bobman, you can obtain a maniquin bust and a wig for use when practicing your head-and-bust lighting technique. Models are usually too dynamic and wrestless to practice on.