heineken Good anywhere

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Pretty spooky pic, looks like it was taken in a haunted house or something. For critique I think that it would help if the whole bottle were in the pic if that's what you were focusing on. Also if it weren't so centered that would help it too...and it's very busy. There are so many things in the pic to look at that it's confusing for the eye. It does provide good movement, but just a bit much.
 
Yep, I'd try cropping the right side off, just to see how it looks
 
leecheewei85 said:
perferred the second to the first...
perhaps the color is too much and you could make it into B&W? and see how the effect turns out? just a suggestion...
Agrea with ya about the second and the color.
Much darker.
B&W, thats an idea.
Thanks
 
dude just remind me not to drink any beer at your house???? ;)
Never know where it's been......
 
Christie Photo said:
I'm wonderin' why this photograph was made. Makes it difficult to critique.
REally?
Ill set the scene for ya. AM, been drinking since 11PM, New camera that cost a little bit of cash. Wife not talking to you because of some marital issues...

Does it help?
 
Christie Photo said:
Oh, yeah... thanks for sharing.

In light of that, I would say this was an EXCELLENT use of time. I can really imagine myself doin' the same!
HA Thanks.
check out my work in the decay theme. Perhaps youll understand better.
 

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