Honest Crtisism Please :-)

Shellyclaire

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Hi all,

I have attached a few pictures which I would Love to hear your thoughts and criticism.

Thanks

Shellyclaire
 

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what about numbering them, so referring to a specific image is easier then :)
 
That's a good first idea. But we can count too, so I'll refer to my favorite one: photo number 6. It tells a story. The first photo has the subject/s too close to the frame with a lot of dead space. Don't get me wrong. There are times when this works to tell a story, but this photo is not utilizing the composition to tell a story. Keep practicing.
 
Thanks guys! Really appreciate your opinions. Photo 6 is my favourite. I'll remember to number them in future. :)
 
You can edit your post here to number them so future responders and you have an easier time with referring to specific photos.

Six is the keeper. The focus is good, the lighting is good. You have a nice line and the dog nose sticking out from under the couch? bed? what-have-you? tells me a story about a dog suspicious of the paparazzi (you with camera).
 
Unfortunately I don't seem to be able to edit the photo's after attaching them to my post... Simplest solution seems to suggest numbers are 1 through 9 from left to right.
 
Maybe one of the site managers can include a auto-numbering setup when attaching photos in this manner. I understand what you mean now.
 
Your thread has been moved tothe General Gallery per the new description for the Beginner's Forum.

The Beginners forum is no longer a C&C or Gallery forum section.

If you would like detailed C&C, don't post more than a couple of photos at a time. I think posting your best photo, 1 at a time is the best way to get good C&C.
Consider how long it would take people to type up specific comments on all 13 photos you have posted. In fact you've gotten little in the way of useful C&C because you have posted so many shots.

 

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