honestly.......

[Ms_jessica]

what would YOU have done differently?

beware.. i am new at this


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these are my babies
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[chris82]

when you post your pics,number them so i can comment anyhow in no 1 and 2 i would take the granyness away its a good shot without it no 3 is great dont touch it no 4 try in black and white or sepia no 5 is good but id like to see it in colour.maybe some contrast in no 6.i like 10 a lot but no 11 is perfect great positioning,how did you take picture of your cams if they were on the table:lmao:

 

[danalec99]

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[Ms_jessica]

haha.. i took that last one with my digital camera =D

 

[Anubis]

I like the ferris wheel shot... very cool!

 

[photo gal]

I like the ferris wheel shot... very cool!

Me too.............welcome! : )

 

[Rob]

+1 for the ferris wheel - nice shot.

Rob

 

[Ms_jessica]

thanks for all the feedback guys!! Ok but the first two.. how come they came out so grainey???

 

[dj isa]

damn i love your pictures.. hahahahaha

hi jess!

 

[Efergoh]

I wouldn't change anything on any of them 'xcept for the first two...

I like contrasty shots, but I think that these two might look spot on if they has less contrast and had a softer feel to them.

 

[Ms_jessica]

yea... i really liked the first two.. but i knew there was something missing.. i dont remmeber what the settings were that i had em on,. but they came out that way... weird.. i ono...keep em comin!!

 

[Efergoh]

...i dont remmeber what the settings were that i had em on,. but they came out that way...

Kodak film?

I've had that problem, too. It isn't a problem if they come out nice, but when you want crisp, the grain is a pain in the butt.

Print a little small and turn down the contrast, and the grain could be minimized, if you want it to be minimized.

 

[Ms_jessica]

yea u know.. i did get those developed through some regular store.. maybe it was the stores grainey pictures.. i usually go to RITZ camera store to get it done.. but its pretty pricey and takes forever... but i guess its worth it to get the pictures comin out nice.. i' wish i could work in my own darkroom, but no room, or money for it... i heard there were places where u can actually rent out a darkroom.. orjust use one with other people who pay to use it too