Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by clothrop, Nov 30, 2016.
Here are some examples of my work Please post your opinion in the comments
Nice. I really like the second one. I can't decide if the last one needs a little spot warming around the young lady's face.
Nice set like the first the best
Thanks for the feedback snowbear I'm really glad you like it!
By the way, I've submitted second photo for the photo of the month competition, I hope it wasn't too late
I like #3 the best. As photographic accomplishment, #'s 1 & 4 are not quite ready for prime time, IMO. #3 could stand being cropped a bit on the top to frame your subjects better. I think the pose(es), lighting, color, etc. are good, just some off the top, please.
Nice set; horses are wonderful animals to shoot! A couple of thoughts for potential improvement:
In the first image, consider cropping vertically just before the very last hairs of the mane. This will eliminate the bulk of the body, which isn't all that interesting, and which is serving as a leading line to pull the viewer's eye past the face and into the black background of the image.
In #3, a little more fill light would have been beneficial. As-is, I think some subtle burning in around the young lady's face and the horse's body as well as a very slight colour correction.
three horse is less than two horses.
I'm a big fan of the first image. I personally enjoy the leading line into the black background.
I like the first, and agree with the previous comment that it could be improved with a different crop. I really want to like the second, the capture of the white horse rearing is very powerful, just not sure I like how the second horse fits.
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