How about a couple I actually like?

[Lacey Anne]

Isn't she pretty? I didn't touch her eyes, btw. Her expressions crack me up though! C&C welcome.

#1

#2

 

[butterflygirl]

Awww...she's a cutie! I love all the bright colors! Nice job!

 

[Lacey Anne]

Thanks! I've been expiramenting with soft light layers.

 

[fotokman]

white balance seems off

 

[epp_b]

#2 needs a quote like, "whatchoo lookin' at?"

 

[NateWagner]

I love the expressions on these... they seem quite natural. However, as was said I think the white balances are a bit off. The eyes look a bit blueish, even that out a bit and I think it'll look great.