Well, you kind of got what you asked for- opinions and criticisms.
If you want an opinion of a particular nature you have to ask a specific question. Such as... Within the framework of this being an art shot, does the unfocused nature add or detract from the overall image? Can you tell that I was going for a melancholy mood?
Now, you might get the exact same answers you got this time, but it would be more focused. Unfortunately, nobody here (that I'm aware of) is psychic. Asked for opinions, you're going to get the gamut unless you focus the attention to your specific wants.