Since I like to help out in the critique section, I feel it's only fair to put up one myself: Actually I have two if you have time: 1. 2. Sorry for the multiple. Please feel free to edit the photo in any way you think would be beneficial. Also feel free to give me any nits, or advice you find. Tell me what you like, and what you feel can be improved on in future shoots. Thanks for your time and advice.