I'm still searchin'

Well... in my quest to build my repertoire of poses for seniors, I've come up with this. I THINK I like it. It would be easy to do. Thoughts?

 

Wow Pete! Stay on this course!!! That is a stunner! lovelovelovelove.............

 

Wow Pete, I think that you are definitely heading in the right direction. Awesome.

 

I agree with this statement and i did just graduate this year. Seems as if this pose is more of a hit or miss so far. I will ask my girlfriend what she thinks

 

i would rotate it because it is slightly difficult to enjoy. with her body facing the upper left corner... just kinda awkward, a great captured shot though

 

I like the pose, just think it might be a little to soft.

 

I'm with Mike. I keep wanting to tilt my head to see her face better. The processing is awesome. But if I was going to tilt a photo, I would rotate so that the neck is lined up at 8 o'clock rather than 10 o'clock...if that makes any sense. Just my opinion, and not based on any rule or guideline.

Great picture though, and lovely model.

NJ

 

I know! Me too. Actually.... I haven't got a clue what I'm doing with the tilt.

Thanks to all who took time to comment. It' truly helpful.

-Pete

 

Maybe a 3/4 length would work better?

 

I don't mind the tilt, but I'd vote for a light background.