insect & animal photography

[mikesnail]

hi all, i'm after some crit and feedback on these images, i am a complete amature, so any feedback and comments would be really helpful for next time i go out and take some more shots!
cheers.
mike

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[metroshane]

NOt bad for a beginner. My critiques are

1. Focus is way shallow. Let loose a little.
2. Focus is soft. Let's get it a little sharper.
3. Lot's of unused spaced. Crop tighter.