It's cupcake time!

RauschPhotography

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And yet, still too early for Valentine's day..not like anyone would turn down a cupcake ;) Minor tweaking in LR3. C&C if you'd like.

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I like the delicate and fancy decoration of the first cupcake, but I think the background, out of focus cupcake at the top is competing for attention with the foreground cupcake. I did a hands-to-screen crop, and I think the photo would be improved a lot by cropping some off of the left hand side, and quite a bit off of the top. The brown area at the upper right hand corner is doing nothing positive for the shot. The second photo is just a non-starter for me.
 
I think a just slightly higher perspective in #2 would have been better so that the decorations on the very top of the cupcake are in focus as well as everything else that's already in focus :)

That's my only "pick" :)
 
Thanks guys! I appreciate the feedback. I wasn't working with any special lighting, just my speedlite. Derrel-I see what you mean, and I do agree with the background OOF cupcake kind of stealing the attention, I'll keep this in mind next time :)
 

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