Jessica *may not be work safe*

[woodsac]

Sorry...could someone please update this as *may not be work safe*...thank you!


This is my friend, Jessica. This was our first photo shoot. She's a real trooper to put up with me learning lighting techniques!!! So in return, she only has to pay for any prints she wants

These are from our latest session. The second one was meant to be a little grungy...so it may not work for everyone?

 

[Sebastian]

The first is really good! Nice b/w composition!
You did a fine job.
The second dosen`t work for me, sorry.

 

[Sw1tchFX]

Oh my god...She's gorgeous. I really like the first one but I don't like the shadow hiding her beutiful face in the 2nd one.

 

[photo0101]

The first one is fantastic, I really like it. The lighting in very nicely done.

 

[Arch]

well i think they both have merit.... i like the position of the first... her face looks well lit...
In the second, i like how mysterious she looks only being able to see her mouth... and because her mouth is so pretty (and nicely lit) i think it works.

your lucky to have such a gorgeous model to work with!!...but i think you've done well shooting her too. :thumbup:

(btw i changed the warning in the title... let me know if you want it any different )

 

[Jazz]

Woodsac – I think these are both wonderful, but I much prefer the second. I think it’s much sexier, partially because it’s more mysterious because I can’t see her eyes, and partially because the light is more directional. The first is lovely, but I guess I’d prefer more directional lighting for drama, as the lighting looks a little flat for this kind of image. What I mean is, all the flesh is about the same in brightness. But everyone else seems to feel the opposite so maybe I’m just crazy today.

[FONT=&quot]Regardless, it’s more high quality work from you. :thumbup:
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[Tangerini]

I really like them both. I think you did a wonderful job showing two different kinds of sexy.

 

[Sk8man]

wow!
these are two nice photoes.
great way to show sexy a side.

 

[JonnyVPA]

I like the first one, ALOT!!, very nice expression, she looks a little tense,

Now for the second..... couple things

I know what you were goin for (i can see it too hehe), she looks tense, the wrinkles in her shirt are too uneven... whenever i do wrinkles, I purposly make them and make the model stand still.... and another thing thats kinda buggin me is the fact that her shirt is tucked under her breasts....

Other than that I like your exposures and Composition, keep it up, you have a real nack for it and beleive me... IT ONLY GETS BETTER!!!

Sorry if i sound harsh in the critique

 

[oldnavy170]

I really like the first one. I think her face looks just perfect. I also like the second one but I wish she was lite up a little more. Other then that I really enjoyed looking at both of these. Excellent job!!!!

 

[woodsac]

Huge, huge thanks to everyone!!!

I got exactly what I wanted...honest feedback and critique...excellent critique! I don't know why, but this was a really tricky shoot for me? We were just throwing stuff together as we went, so not everything came out how I wanted. She loves both of em, so mission accomplished there.

Jazz, I do think I needed my main light a little lower in the first. I think my thought process for that one was that if there weren't any dramatic shadows, it would give a softer appearance. These were kind of meant to be #1, more sensual, and #2 more sexy.

So I guess it worked a little in each photo. But I know each one can use work. Thanks again, I really appreciate the honesty :thumbup:

 

[Ripnowell45]

You did an awesome job on this shot. She is a really pretty girl too. I wish I could get someone to model for me so I could practice.