Just one for now, CC very much appreicated

JenR

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I am supposed to be organizing and tagging photo files. Instead, I find myself stopping to reminisce and edit shots that got missed originally. Why yes, I am the queen of procrastination. :wink:

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CC is always welcome and very much appreciated!
 
I would just crop it square or 4x3.. and get rid of some unneeded background (including that white spot!) ;) Also burned in distracting foreground grass highlights

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Thanks for the input. Somehow I missed that white spot. Now that you've mentioned it, I can't look away. :)
 
The light, retouching and b&w conversion look great. The pose/composition, as mentioned, need a little help. The square does really work much better.
 
This is not too bad. I wish you wouldnt have chopped off her feet but even with that its not too bad cause it has a nice focus on her face and decent spacing still. I would clone out those white spots on the left too since they are a bit distracting.
 

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