2nd one is out of focus.
I'm going to be honest with you...I think her pants are not the right size for her...they are squeezing her at the top and in the butt...like she's trying to shrink something she doesn't need to. She seems like a pretty girl, with a nice figure, but the pants are not working with her.
You did a great job of capturing her playfulness, though...almost an innocent childhood like vibe going on...(some kids never grow up kind of thing)