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I know you didn't choose her outfit but personally I would have refused to shoot because of it particularly in the second shot it looks like she is try to wash her butt. As far as the idea of shooting at a laundry mat...??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
C&C per req:
1. Seems a little under-exposed to me.
2. Ummm... all I can think is that the model couldn't find a loo...
I think there's a lot of potential here, but I'm not sure that you realized it. First of all, clothing choices should ALWAYS be discussed and agreed on by both sides (I'm assuming this was a TF* shoot), because it's as much for you as for her. Brown shoes, green socks, yellow shirt and black hair bow????? WHAT???? I'm a GUY and even I know that just plain doesn't work.
I think you could have done a lot here with a cutesy pin-up style outfit and the laundry machines. Did you plan anything? Have a shot list? What was the vision for the day? Again, being frank, it looks like you two showed up and went, "ummm... okay, try this..." Remember, plan the shoot, shoot the plan. It doesn't hurt to amend the plan, but you have to have something to amend to start with!
Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.
~John
The lighting is pretty flat and there is no 'pop' to the images.
Some OCF would have helped. Strobist: Lighting 101
I also think #1 is under exposed.
Fun idea. And you're doing ok. You most absolutely can make the location work, and even the outfit.
But you need to up your game if you really want to pull this off.
Lighting. You need lighting. And a more deliberate approach to these shots.
Better makeup, a little "styling" of the outfit, and some deliberate lighting would have helped considerably.
Also, the cart shot is kinda ruined by the background. Be aware of the background and composition at all times while shooting... you should have paused to moved her so... maybe you get the dryers behind her, or better yet ONE dryer behind and to the side of her.
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I know you didn't choose her outfit but personally I would have refused to shoot because of it particularly in the second shot it looks like she is try to wash her butt. As far as the idea of shooting at a laundry mat...??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I didn't want to refuse because I wanted the practice. I chose a laundromat shoot bc it was something different for me. Originally the shoot was set for the beach but the rain killed that. However when I chose her from her model mayhem profile she was significantly smaller (unbeknownst to me) so in retrospect the laundromat was probably a better fit than the beach.