light house

[danielsmith4213]

hey guys, i went on a holiday this weekend and took this snap of a lighthouse. Feedback and crit would be much appreciated Thanks

 

[usayit]

nice capture and exposure. I like how the clouds, which are almost as important as the lighthouse itself, are not blown out. They almost seem to wrap around the lighthose.

Is there a reason why you have the lighthouse framed to the left? I know at times the subject looks best when not set dead in the center. In this case, it places a bit of dead space to the right... which doesn't seem intentional.

 

[danielsmith4213]

yes i realized that it was framed a bit wrong, if I cropped the dead space out would it be more affective? thanks for the crit

 

[subimatt]

I agree, I feel it should be cropped so the lighthouse is centered. Other than that I dont think I would change anything.

 

[LongDucDong]

I like it! Looks great in mono!

 

[danielsmith4213]

I think it looks way better cropped