Lines of Annapolis

[jocose]

Here's another from the Annapolis shoot. I'm not sure I like this one, so I would appreciate some honest feedback, particularly on my PS work.

Thanks.

 

[GoM]

I dunno, I'm split. On the one hand, you did an (I think) excellent job at getting the tones, etc just right..but on the other...the shot/subject itself just doesn't do anything for me, it's 'just' a (presumably a) roof.

 

[postedpixels]

I really like it! Nice lines and great contrast

-Aaron
www.postedpixels.com

 

[jocose]

Thanks for the comments.

GoM, it's the side of a building, actually, but yea...that's kind of what I feel like also.

Thanks, Aaron!

 

[Mohain]

I dunno, I'm split. On the one hand, you did an (I think) excellent job at getting the tones, etc just right..but on the other...the shot/subject itself just doesn't do anything for me, it's 'just' a (presumably a) roof.

Hah, I'm the other way round :mrgreen:

I love the shot but the tones don't do much for me. Perhaps a B&W conversion?

EDIT: I'd also have a play with the transform tool to get the lines completly parallel with the edges.

 

[antarchitect]

I think it's a neat shot. As stated above though I would like it better if the lines were completely straight.

 

[jocose]

OK, gang, I have done my best to adjust the tilt. What say you now?

 

[anua]

Hah, I'm the other way round :mrgreen:

I love the shot but the tones don't do much for me. Perhaps a B&W conversion?

EDIT: I'd also have a play with the transform tool to get the lines completly parallel with the edges.

this is Exactly what i wanted to say, so i wont do it, ill just quote Mohain -

good job! -

anja

 

[antarchitect]

OK, gang, I have done my best to adjust the tilt. What say you now?

Looks good :thumbup:

 

[jocose]

thanks again.