Lisbon - Old Capital, Old Stores

[crphotolover]

Hi guys

this is one of the photos of my project about the oldest stores in Lisbon

Can you give me your opinion?

LIsbon Stores by CR PhotoLover Page, no Flickr

 

[sleist]

I think cropping out the section on the right with the gas meter would help.
It draws the eye too much.

 

[crphotolover]

I think cropping out the section on the right with the gas meter would help.
It draws the eye too much.

Thank you for the comment i will crop it then, i want to give attention to the lady at the left corner

 

[mmaria]

agree with above, it's the brightest section, loose it

 

[ruifo]

Linda Lisboa!

 

[The_Traveler]

This is way too tight, imo.
There is no context; you've chopped off the legs of the chair and the steps in the entry but have included a not so interesting other wall with a gas meter that has nothing to do with the store.

I would much rather have seen something framed like this, that put the store in some sort of context,

 

[sleist]

It's often a good idea to take both a portrait and landscape shot of a scene.
This helps get you thinking about framing the scene and composition options.

I do this often when timing allows.

 

[crphotolover]

Linda Lisboa!

Linda mesmo

 

[crphotolover]

This is way too tight, imo.
There is no context; you've chopped off the legs of the chair and the steps in the entry but have included a not so interesting other wall with a gas meter that has nothing to do with the store.

I would much rather have seen something framed like this, that put the store in some sort of context,

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You're right, i think that i can repeat the photo again, and i will put the result here

 

[The_Traveler]

You're right,.............

I'm going to ask you to speak to my wife who assures me that, no matter the subject, I am never right.