Logo design

[::trainwreck::]

Playing around with a logo design. Heres one of the many variations I've come up with. Too busy? Too cliche? Any ideas?

 

[MrRamonG]

Serves its purpose. However, doesn't actually stand out.

 

[The Shoe]

First thought: Pretty cool.
Second thought: The text looks off.
Third thought: Is every word a different size?
Fourth thought: I wonder what this is meant for.

It looks good, but as RamonG pointed out, it doesn't really stand out. Like something backgroundy that might be used for a web site.

 

[BirdyIsMe]

I think it's a decent concept, but I'm not sure I like the font choice, and the use of lowercase.

Maybe something like this?

 

[Andrew Sun]

I think you should re-design it. I'm trying hard but I cannot find something positive to say about it :blushing:

I would recommend reading some of the best industry tips from these guys - Logo design tips | The Logo Factory design studio

 

[mygirlu]

It looks ok, my suggestion is if its possible u should have added two colours just like Blue and Gray something like that, then I will view more attractive which need specially for photography stuff.

 

[SrBiscuit]

im with andrew on this one.
seems dated to me.
if you have to cut the descenders off, fine, but i would avoid cutting halfway thru the letters.

 

[KmH]

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