Long Exposures: Advice/Critique Wanted

myopia

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*Taken with my Ricoh GR-D point and shoot

1. Denver Skyline
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2. Coast Guard Lighthouse (Cape Cod)
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3. Boulder, CO.
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4. Boulder, CO. #2
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*I need some advice.
 
I like them overall.....but

#1 Pretty good. Just a little clean up at the top there to make the sky nice and black. You have just a little bit of lens flare at the top there. Nothing major

#2: I like the composition but the parking lot needs to go. Just a little crop here and there and that'll be fixed.

#3 & #4: I like #4 actually better because it shows more of the actual city and I'm personally a little distracted by the boulder (no pun intended) at the left of picture 3. The effect is very dramatic and I really like that effect too.


Thanks for sharing

~Michael~
 
the first and the last one are my favorites.

i love the lights
and the angle you shot them at.

good work!
 

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