Lou Portrait

[Splouff]

Hi there,

This is my firts attempt of portrait photography.

Any coment wold be welcome to improve my technique!
I've got trouble getting the eyes clear... any idea? I'm using a Tamron 90mm

Cheers and happy new year 2007!
Delphine

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[hazelwestphoto]

The first two look way over sharpened. I like the composition of all three.

 

[Azuth]

I like the first two, the third is a little flat. I think you have the eyes in focus but they are appearing a little grey. You could try selecting just the eyes and adjusting the levels, even just an auto levels should bring out the white.

 

[Tyson]

#1 is good, what camera are you useing?

 

[craig]

Nice! She looks like a mermaid for some reason. The first frame is on point. The background works well and her smile is priceless. The second is a little rough. I think the horizontal lines are distracting. I like the angelic glow in the third photo, but it resembles a mug shot

 

[Splouff]

Hi guys,

Thanks for your comments.
I use a Nikon D70 with a 90mm Tamron lense.

I personnaly like the 2 the best...

I decided the 1. was no good... should have done the focus on the othe eye

After your comments, I also changed few things on the second one and pit the third one in colour since I couldn't find any B&W that would suit me.

 

[TheCatch22]

i accutally like the third photo alot i think that if you would have gotten more of her head in and not so much of her chest it would ahve looked better but great photos man!