"Love"

GYFÄP · May 23, 2007

Here's a photo I took yesterday. I've decided to call it "Love".

Tell me what you think!..
- Comments & Critique is very welcome

Trenton Romulox · May 23, 2007

Boring.

Alex_B · May 23, 2007

I'd call it "Close up of a fence" .. sorry, just being nasty here

Anyway, being serious now, it seems you were going for symmetry, but slightly missed it, this could still be corrected by cropping though... there is too much space on the left side.

then, IMHO, having the focus slightly more in the front would give this image much more balance,... now the eye automatically is drawn to the top right wire and the bottom left... whereas I think the focus should be more on the middle part (judginge by the title). That is just a personal feeling with this ... others might not share it.

what i like about it is the simplicity and clarity.

loser101 · May 23, 2007

Trenton Romulox said:
Boring.

Agree

The_Traveler · May 23, 2007

Having a meaningful title doesn't make the image better or worse.
The fence is over-exposed.

GYFÄP · May 24, 2007

Thank you very much for your comments!!!

The_Traveler said:
Having a meaningful title doesn't make the image better or worse.
The fence is over-exposed.

I agree with what you're saying. I was just having this feeling while I took the picture. Maybe it meant more in my head to me than to everyone else. I think that's the case..

Alex_B said:
I'd call it "Close up of a fence" .. sorry, just being nasty here

Anyway, being serious now, it seems you were going for symmetry, but slightly missed it, this could still be corrected by cropping though... there is too much space on the left side.

then, IMHO, having the focus slightly more in the front would give this image much more balance,... now the eye automatically is drawn to the top right wire and the bottom left... whereas I think the focus should be more on the middle part (judginge by the title). That is just a personal feeling with this ... others might not share it.

what i like about it is the simplicity and clarity.

Thanks for your tips and oppinion. I can really use what you're saying and some of it I've even thought about myself - like the cropping.. And I think you're right about the focus as well.. the photo would've been better with more focus in the front.

I'm glad you at least liked it

!

Trenton Romulox said:
Boring.

I'm sorry but it doesn't really help me that much if you don't specify what you dislike about the picture or what makes it boring..
But thanks for your oppinion anyway...