wow, thats a lot of pics.
some folks here will probably tell you to choose to and use those for CC...
overall, great captures. In profile shots, try to move the hair out of the eyes, to see the person.
Beautiful! I like the prosessiong and pose in 7, but the highlights on her arm make it look kind of deformed. 16 is sooo cute, but she looks liek she has sad eyes. I always tell my clients to smile just a touch when I am doing profile shots or just the eyes, it brings the cheekbones up just a bit, and can create a more flattering profile. Hate to say it, but Tyra is right with the whole "smiling with the eyes" concept, and I think that could have brought that great shot to an outstanding shot, fun and silly as it is!