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I let loose my floodgates of abstraction with this one, C&C is greatly appreciated.

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Untitled by theofficialtevo, on Flickr
 
Unfortunately on this image, me thinks you can bump til the cows some home and not get much response...there just isn't anything of great interest in the image - maybe if you cropped at the top of the shadow you might spark some interest.
 
I don't hate it. I think it's a nice composition, well balanced with some textural interest in there and a pleasing set of tones.

I don't really get it, either. I can't help but feel like it's upside down. As an abstract, this is the correct orientation -- dark tones down, light tones up. As a picture of a thing, I feel like I am looking at floor joists for the floor above, and that you've flipped it over. This contradiction definitely detracts.

Also, I don't really get any sensation looking at this beyond 'hmm, cool shadows'.
 

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