RMThompson
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On the first one:
Did you add in the cigarette and tears? The cigarette looks fake, and the tears don't really look natural. I think her facial expression is perfect though.
I think this one would be much better with a more realistic looking cigarette (did you just outline it to see it better against the white background?), and more natural looking tears.
I like 3 & 4 the most (3 more); I think 2 is good too, but there's something about it that just seems 'off' to me...
...Just my opinion.
3 is my favorite. I like 1 too, but it think it falls short because of what I mentioned above.
Sorry if that's all too negative; I do like them, but - you've posted other work that blows these away, IMO.
The spreadeagled position in the second one seems really unnatural to me, but the lighting is really good. Any particular reason a brick wall is being reflected?
I'd have to say #3 is my favourite. What did people think about a girl in a bikini walking around the city? Bet she got a few double-takes.
My favorite is 4, very attractive and she looks totally confident in front of the camera. Were the outdoor shots all natural light?
To each his own, I guess, but to me, #3 is the standout among some pretty fine photos. The whole comp is A1, but what really does it for me is the way her beautiful face is framed with the umbrella.
Thanks. I don't get the "she looks like she's peeing" comments myself. I think the pose, and the look on her face (it was genuine) gives the whole thing an almost child-like interest in the rain.
Have you ever seen a girl pee in the woods? Thats how we stand/squat
Also, I really like the last one you posted. That pose really shows off her curves.