Mom and 2 girls at Botanical gardens (11 shots)

Feetjie · Mar 14, 2008

Comments and advice and ideas welcome!
(Please don't mind the watermark, it's for proofing/displaying purposes only, and not printed that way.)

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TFL and looking forward to your comments!

Lacey Anne · Mar 14, 2008

It's hard to look at the first few because the watermark hits the girl right between the eyes. hehe. I'm laughing at myself, not you, don't worry.
I love the one of the baby with the blocks. Too cute! The white's seem a bit overexposed though. Nice photos! I can't wait for our weather to improve so I can do some outdoor sessions!

Feetjie · Mar 15, 2008

Thanks Lacey!

Some advice please:
I am not sure if I should remove the leave in front ofthebaby or not. Somehow I think it adds a certain "oomph" to the photo, but maybe it will look better removed? (Nrs 5 & 6.)

twocolor · Mar 15, 2008

leave the leaf, I think it adds alot to the photo. Very beautiful shots!

Feetjie · Mar 15, 2008

Thank you Two Color.

Tolyk · Mar 15, 2008

9 is priceless

Feetjie · Mar 16, 2008

Thanks, I also love 9!

kundalini · Mar 16, 2008

Sorry, but the watermarks are too distracting. Some potentially cute photos but are ruined by the watermark.

bellacat · Mar 16, 2008

kundalini said:
Sorry, but the watermarks are too distracting. Some potentially cute photos but are ruined by the watermark.

yeah that. I know you are just trying to protect your photos but this is a bit much and its hard to see the photo. Sorry

KristinaS · Mar 16, 2008

--These are cute, but I think your focus is off in a lot of them. You want to make sure the sharpest part of the pic is the subject's eyes. In 1, (2), 3 & (4), I think the focus fell on the bear (I can't be too sure because of the giant watermark). In 5 & (6), it looks like the focus is on the leaf.
--I'm not a huge fan of selective coloring, but that's a personal taste thing.
--I don't like that the only thing you see in #10 is the back of the head.
--The look like they are slipping off the frame in #11. It looks like you might have been on a hill, but it might look better if you straighten it out some. Also, watch chopping off limbs. I think this one looks a tad blown, too, but it might be my monitor.