the light on the left that is streaked is some what distracting. It was the first thing I saw...and then my eyes jumped to the bright light in the middle then down the the red sign in the middle then finally took in the rest.
I think the horizon might be slanted slightly to the right. Makes me feel like I am falling off the edge of one of the buildings.
Are you in another building shooting this from a window? or did you have roof access? I really like night time city shots.