More Beach Portraits - PLEASE C&C

[Theantiquetiger]

These are a little better than my last ones I posted (IMO), my brother and niece


todd2a by Theantiquetiger, on Flickr


todd1a by Theantiquetiger, on Flickr

 

[cgipson1]

Your niece is cute.. what a smile!

A little nitpick.. her eyes, not sure if it is the processing or not.. but they are uneven in color / lightness / sharpness. Check your original and see if it is the same there...

 

[ShooterJ]

Really like the first shot. :thumbup:

 

[Tony S]

I like the first shot as it is, but the heavy vignette kills the second one.

 

[Granddad]

As Tony said, dump the vignette on #2 and you'd have a good photo. That little lady can really pose!

 

[Ballistics]

I agree with Charlie, the retouching needs to be redone on #1.

 

[michael9000000]

I really like composition, lighting, and pose in image #1, but I see two glaring problems with the processing:

1. It seems like you have overdone the eyes... Especially the whites...

2. Her lips seem painted in an unnatural way...

Cute kid! Thanks for sharing!

 

[Rosy]

I thought it was my monitor here at work. I rather see the girl's face in image #2 than the PP in image #1
Can you post the unedited version on #1, or at least exclude the editing you did on her face and lips?

love the posing for daddy and dtr

 

[ronlane]

#1 all the way. Cute girl.

 

[kathyt]

The poses are really nice but they are both so underexposed it is giving them those orange tones.

 

[ktan7]

Excellent portraiture