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[Rosy]

as always, please share your CC.
1 (some hot spots?)

Up to 8x10 by casualapproach, on Flickr

2

_DSC1809 copy by casualapproach, on Flickr

3

_DSC1875 copy by casualapproach, on Flickr

 

[ronlane]

#3 = MONEY

 

[Rosy]

#3 = MONEY

thank you for always replying Ron Lane

 

[tirediron]

Nice work! C&C per req:

1. Yes, just a little hot on the key side; I think dropping your key by 1/3 - 1/2 stop and moving slightly left you would have nailed this one. I'd also consider opening up slightly so as not to crop off the bottom of the night-dress; not a huge issue, but I think this image would be even better it were all there and maybe the teddy-bear was moved around front a bit.

2. GREAT SHOT! Other than being just a bit too tight; colours and exposure look spot on to me, BUT... you've cropped an elbow and a finger-tip. Again, had you opened up just a little more this would have been a winner!

3. Pretty much spot on; the crops are bold enough that while not ideal IMO, they work, and the exposure is about perfect.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[frommrstomommy]

3 is your winner for sure! 2 is adorable as well.. but you're off center again and its odd.

 

[Rosy]

yep thank you

 

[amolitor]

#1 is too hot, #2 is tooo cold, and #3 is juuuust right

Sweet kid, the poses are all great, everything is great about all of them except for the light (which is pretty good in all) which is best in #3.