More portrait practise

[tempra]

Trying some low key tonight with my nephews - comments/suggestions more than welcome.

 

[SpeedTrap]

I like the first 2 but the last one it a bit off, I think the skin tones are too far apart to work together in low key. But great job!
love to see the low key shots.

 

[Christie Photo]

I feel all of these would benifit from a subtle background light or a skim light to afford a bit of separation from the background. More what's more important, the clothing is out of key.

You're not far off. I like how close you have the two of them posed.

-Pete