my 2nd portrait

[CHRISTIAN2170]

a picture of an old friend TRYING to study in the library (as you see...we didn't)

what do you think??

OTE!

 

[EJBPhoto]

Hmmm looks nice, but I Think you can probably see therres a bit too much shadow on his face.

 

[markc]

I think you did a good job.
I'd also like to see a little more light on his face. A reflector would help. You could use a large book by opening it up and placing it just to his left/your right so that the light bounces off the pages and helps light his face. I'd try to get it as close as possible without getting in the frame.

 

[CHRISTIAN2170]

You could use a large book

great idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanx!

 

[Katz]

I agree that is a great idea! One other thing, is his face is a bit soft, it seems like you were focused on his ear/jacket. Other then that, love it!