my 5 month old twins, 1st studio attempt c n c pls

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Hi
This was my first attempt at a studio shoot, with a borrowed flash. Id like some c n c. Im considering buying a small portable studio set up thanks
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I am no professional but i think a little fill light on the right side to get rid of that little bit of shadow, but like I said I am no professional. BTW those kids are to cute
 
I'd like it a little more with the one on the left completely in the frame. Kind of curious what it looks like in color.
 
Would be better with less of the top and more of the left. I love the difference in expression you captured.
 
The cropping doesn't bother me. I like the shot. The only thing I might do is move the background further away so that the wrinkles are out of focus. However, I don't think that hurts the shot much at all and with 2 subjects you can't open up too far or you'll have a subject out of focus so moving them further from the backdrop is all you can do. (OK Photoshop>Select>Gaussian Blur could work).
 

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