My Other Love

[EverGrey]

 

[Calliope]

First of all, welcome!

Interesting concept. The streaks are slightly distracting - they seem a bit blown out a tad... if you can fix that, I think this would be a very good photo!

 

[crawdaddio]

I like the blown highlights on this one. It's like she's being pulled across the floor.

 

[Rob]

Interesting shot! I think you could probably crop a bit tighter to give more impact - the black blob in the bottom right hand corner needs to go too! Like the use of B&W and the light.

Rob