My RETURN! C&C

[kric2schaam626]

I haven't been on here in two months (thanks to work). Upon my return, I have done a few high school senior shoots. Just wanted to share a couple shots from one shoot. Let me know what you think! :lmao:

Number one isn't a typical senior shot, but it was per her request.

 

[kric2schaam626]

Bump

 

[8ball]

Should post these in the beginer section.
But for number 1, I find it hard to distinguish the girl from the back ground. And I also think if you croped it tighter focus wouldn't be on the open space more on the subject.
As for number 2, I like the concept but it appears a tad bit over exposed, and the yellow flower in the upper right hand side is very distracting, my eyes go to that before the girl.

Kepp working at it!

 

[kric2schaam626]

Should post these in the beginer section.

Ok . . . though last time I did someone told me I wasn't really a beginner anymore.

 

[ayeelkay]

The second photo is beautiful. The blur in the foreground is a bit distracting though. The first photo bothers me a bit, it looks slightly tilted and seems very dark overall.

 

[kric2schaam626]

The second photo is beautiful. The blur in the foreground is a bit distracting though. The first photo bothers me a bit, it looks slightly tilted and seems very dark overall.

Is this a little better?

 

[8ball]

much better

 

[point-&-shoot]

very nice.

The second photo is beautiful. The blur in the foreground is a bit distracting though. The first photo bothers me a bit, it looks slightly tilted and seems very dark overall.

Is this a little better?