my whip

leeroix · Jun 8, 2012

went to mare island the other day. took a few shots of my car. thoughts? suggestions? anything?

sundown by keips66, on Flickr
it used to be black. but i wrapped it.

12sndsgood · Jun 8, 2012

not a huge fan of the satins and flat paing jobs, but this doesnt look to bad. love the plate lol.

1. first shot isn't bad looking, think I would have had more space in front of the car then in back.

2. was this towards sunset or sunrise? would have liked to see the sky less blown out. maybe if it was sunset, if you had waited just a bit more later.

Jaemie · Jun 8, 2012

Sweet car! I want one.

#1: Crop out those leading lines (tracks are taking my eyes to the back of the scene) - crop it closer. Could use more light on the front of the car, next time. Nice light on the wheels.
#2: I like this. And I agree with what 12sndsgood said.