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Here's a mock-up/pilot of our splash that we're going to be using during slideshows or videos. Let me know what you guys/gals think! :D

btw ignore the music...I think I'm leaning towards ommitting the audio.

[video=vimeo;5659475]http://vimeo.com/5659475[/video]
 

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I think it is a little long. Making the words appear one by one doesnt do anything to me. I see... Simply.. then dashy.. then photography. I rather see something else going on first then see Simply dashy photography appears all at once. I feel like you can put more meat in that 15 sec period instead of just saying 3 words one by one and disappear. I hope I am making sense.
 
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Schwetty thanks for the inputs bud!
 

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I did like the ending. I didnt like entry of the rectangle. When it flies to the screen you didnt see anything on it and all of the sudden you see the logo when closer.
 

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Schwettylens said:
I think it is a little long. Making the words appear one by one doesnt do anything to me. I see... Simply.. then dashy.. then photography. I rather see something else going on first then see Simply dashy photography appears all at once. I feel like you can put more meat in that 15 sec period instead of just saying 3 words one by one and disappear. I hope I am making sense.

+1 I didn't like the sequence buy I did like the end
 
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+1 I didn't like the sequence buy I did like the end

Consistent on this. I'm assuming you're male =P. I added the end part to cater to the men. My wife likes the intro sequence(maybe it's a woman's touch) but I'll have to agree that the initial sequence can be compressed more.

...I'm not sure she will...lol
 

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