Need your opinion TPF on the logo/splash

[camz]

Here's a mock-up/pilot of our splash that we're going to be using during slideshows or videos. Let me know what you guys/gals think!

btw ignore the music...I think I'm leaning towards ommitting the audio.

[video=vimeo;5659475]http://vimeo.com/5659475[/video]

 

[Robin Usagani]

I think it is a little long. Making the words appear one by one doesnt do anything to me. I see... Simply.. then dashy.. then photography. I rather see something else going on first then see Simply dashy photography appears all at once. I feel like you can put more meat in that 15 sec period instead of just saying 3 words one by one and disappear. I hope I am making sense.

 

[camz]

Schwetty thanks for the inputs bud!

 

[Robin Usagani]

I did like the ending. I didnt like entry of the rectangle. When it flies to the screen you didnt see anything on it and all of the sudden you see the logo when closer.

 

[thinkricky]

I think it is a little long. Making the words appear one by one doesnt do anything to me. I see... Simply.. then dashy.. then photography. I rather see something else going on first then see Simply dashy photography appears all at once. I feel like you can put more meat in that 15 sec period instead of just saying 3 words one by one and disappear. I hope I am making sense.

+1 I didn't like the sequence buy I did like the end

 

[camz]

+1 I didn't like the sequence buy I did like the end

Consistent on this. I'm assuming you're male =P. I added the end part to cater to the men. My wife likes the intro sequence(maybe it's a woman's touch) but I'll have to agree that the initial sequence can be compressed more.

...I'm not sure she will...lol