Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by chips, Aug 13, 2004.
any suggestions/comments welcome
Neon can be hard to capture, so I can apprciate that.
Compositionally, I wish you'd gotten that triangle nearest the forground completely in the picture. I don't like it being chopped off like that.
Because of the glow, it's hard to tell if your focus is good.
I would have to agree about the left side triangle; one step back and maybe you'd have it in the frame? It does look a little soft, but the words are legible, so it's hard to say. Not a bad effort.
thanks. the original is quite sharp, its just gone a bit soft with reducing the quality for the web. thanks for the composition tip.
I think that this is really nice photo of neons. I always have difficulities with capturing them so congratz.
I agree. Nice job!
thanks all! was my first attempt at neons so im pleased u like it! ill b on the look out for neons from now on
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